Your prompt for JusJoJan 2019, January 7th is brought to you by Tara! Click here to find her last post and say hi while you’re there! Tara’s word for our prompt today is “memento.” Use it anywhere in your post or make it the theme of your post. Have fun!

Together they sat
The cold winter night attacked the cab of the truck
demanding entry
they sat in silence
except for the noise of the idling motor
and the heat blowing on their cold, tired bodies
It had been a long day
exhausted from trying to act happy
for people that did not matter
was anybody really fooled?
now they were alone
in palpable awkwardness
he was at fault
for the silence and discomfort
he had asked her to ride with him
knowing it could go one way
likely the wrong one
but he had something to say
“I still love you.” he blurted
she didn’t move or turn her head
she stared out the windshield
into the unforgiving darkness
her silence was deafening
he wanted to ask
“did you hear me?”
but he knew she did.
He wanted a response
even if he had to force it
but knew all that he had come to find out
it was too late
it was over
he changed the subject
“I found this picture of us.”
she stared ahead into the night
“It’s from when we were dating 25 years ago.’
she didn’t ask to see it
her case was made
a silent verdict reached
a judgment rendered
she didn’t love him anymore
she had moved on
fault, causality and blame
didn’t matter
he clutched the picture in his hand
rolled it through his fingers
he would keep it
it was a precious memento
of a great story
that had run its course
Read this after the 8th submission. I just have to repeat my compliment. I can relate.
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That happened last week
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Hi Billy, I’ve tagged you for a challenge https://allaboutlife.blog/2019/01/09/finish-the-story-the-final-hunt-part-6/ Hope that you’ll give it a go as I’d love to see how you move on with the story :O) x
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It won’t be today. I have 2 Dr’s appts and a lot of snow to shovel
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No worries Billy, when you’re ready 😊
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done. Let me know what you think
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Already seen it and I thought it was wonderful 😊 XX
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There’s nth like sharing silence with sb you love, but when it turns into deafening silence, it’s no good.
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I know. I’ve lived it
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Indeed.
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